September 21, 2020

Dialogue Advice / VLOG + 2 Picture Book Giveaway!

Thank you for coming to a vlog edition of Write with Fey!

This is a PowerPoint presentation with audio that focuses on dialogue. Do you need help creating realistic dialogue for your characters? What about dialogue tags and grammar? Check out this video for advice.


Dialogue Advice

Length: 15:25

Thanks for watching!

Feel free to comment on my blog and/or on the video on YouTube. To go to this video's YouTube page, click on the title located on the video.

QUESTION: What is your dialogue advice?


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Eligibility: International
Number of Winners: One

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  1. Great vlog on dialogue! For example, "I am going to kill you," HaHa!
    Excellent point about realistic dialogue. We want the reader to believe the conversation is as real as the characters having it.

  2. Thanks for sharing this. Pinning it.