Friday, August 31, 2012

The Middle Of Your Book

Your readers are still reeling from the big point in the middle of your story. I believe that all stories need to have a big middle plot event. This won’t be as big as the climax at the end, but it’s big enough to have your readers biting their nails into little nubs on their fingers and blurting out, “Oh my God” at every other sentence, making everyone stare at them with funny looks.
Or perhaps that middle event is the big romantic scene between your character, which caused your readers’ heart rates to escalate dramatically. Dangerously. Their eyes were practically steaming as they read the encounter between your two characters. They may be having sweet dreams tonight.

Next, write the fallout. This is where the events that immediately follow start to unfold, and the consequences being.
A stack of books opened to chapter ten.
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Consult your detailed plan and determine what should happen next. Make it as realistic as possible. Think about real-life situations to help you with this part. If your characters were intimate, ponder what normally happens after two people have sex. Will one of your characters wake up alone because the other snuck out quietly, determined to pretend last night never happened, or to escape their feelings? Will they part swearing that it’ll never happen again? Or will they wake up together happier than ever before?
If a crime was just committed in your story, consider what should follow. Will your main character be at the crime scene, taking in all the details, and getting into the criminal’s mind? If a suspect was brought in by a dangerous car chase or hand-to-hand combat, will your main character lead the interrogation to pry out a confession?
As in real life, every event has an outcome, and every day has a tomorrow. Events and days in books are no exception.

QUESTION: Do you like fallouts of events to be slower paced or just as exciting as the event itself?

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Friday, August 24, 2012

What Would You Do?

A book is a work of fiction. You can make the unimaginable happen and you can let your characters do the unthinkable.

If you are writing a fantasy or supernatural story, by all means let your imagination run wild, but you need to at least keep one foot grounded in reality. As I have mentioned before, you want your characters to be as realistic as possible even if they are mythical. They need to talk as you talk, feel what you feel, and do things that you would do.

Asking yourself, “What would I do?” will help you to stay authentic in your writing instead of trying to figure out what someone else would do or say; it’ll also help your readers to believe the story you are telling.

When your main character is in a confrontation consider what you would do if you were them. How would you react? What would you say?

What would I do? Now that is a tricky question!
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If your main character goes through something traumatic try to imagine going through the same thing. How would you feel? How would you cope?

Don’t just do this for your main character though; use this technique for all of your characters. An actor has to embody the character they are playing –especially a character that is dark and twisted. All writers should do the same thing. I do.

For my second book, when my main character is stuck in a psychiatric ward, I put my mind into that situation to understand how she would feel, and when she was having a mental break down, I pretended that I was too. At one point, I wrapped my arms around my body, rocked back and forth in a chair, and ticked my feet as if I wanted to run. From my mouth, I was repeating, “I don’t know. I don’t know. I don’t know!” In one scene, my character is doing exactly that.

QUESTION: So what would you do if you were in your characters shoes?

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Friday, August 17, 2012

Protagonist vs Antagonist

A protagonist is the main character in a novel or story that all the action revolves around. They are the hero of the story, the one we are rooting for from beginning to end. We follow their life, learn about their problems, and know their feelings and thoughts.

A protagonist needs a weakness. This weakness can be anything, from something that physically makes the protagonist weak to an event from his/her past that frightens him/her. It can even be a bad quality.

In my series, the protagonist has supernatural powers and a form of Kryptonite that hurts her. She also has many scars from her past that resurface during the course of the series and a slight (okay, not so slight) anger problem that always gets the better of her.

A protagonist also loves. In every book, from every genre, the protagonist loves. If they don’t actually fall in love then they should show love. Another emotion a protagonist must reveal, at least once throughout the whole story, is fear. Fear is the most common emotion; it makes us human, and as I’ve mentioned before you need to make your characters as real as possible. Even my main character, that is known to be fearless, experiences fear in each novel.

Most of all, a protagonist must struggle. Life is all about struggle. There needs to be conflict that the protagonist has to overcome whether it is beating cancer, putting a crumbling marriage back together, finding true love, or saving the world.

Me as the protagonist.

Every story has a protagonist but not every story has an antagonist.

An antagonist is a person who opposes, competes with, and fights against the main character in a novel. They are the villain of the story, the one we are hoping will fall to their demise. They cause problems for the protagonist, do everything in their power to ruin their life, and sometimes even try to kill them.

An antagonist is driven to cause conflict on the main character out of pure spite or for a deeper, darker reason and they won’t stop until they see the protagonist fall!

If you are writing the type of story that requires an antagonist like a mystery, horror, or thriller here are five tips to help you create a powerful antagonist:

1. Surprise your readers by putting an air of mystery around the antagonist. Keep their identity and motive a secret.

2. Describe them in a darker light than you would the protagonist. Make them look evil!

3. Create dialogue that is sinister.

4. Make them coldhearted. Other than hate and anger, don’t let him or her show any feelings, because an antagonist doesn’t have sympathy, compassion, mercy, and they certainly don’t regret their actions.

5. Have them do horrific things throughout the course of the novel such as threaten, kidnap, torture, and even kill.

Me as the antagonist.

UPDATE: Thanks to a comment I received, I want to clarify what I said about the antagonist, especially #4. There are really two types of antagonists; the kind that is extremely dark and coldhearted toward their victims and the kind that while they are portrayed as "evil" they still posses at least one good quality. Above, I was describing the first kind. It is always up to the writer on which version of the antagonist they want to use.

In my series, there are multiple bad guys and a few of them do show good qualities and even become good. But the main antagonists’ in my stories are too “evil” to show an ounce of goodness because not all antagonists are meant to. But they definitely do have a weakness, which I will add as #6.     

6. Give your antagonist a weakness. This weakness doesn't have to be a quality opposite from their demeanor like one that is classified as good, but the antagonist can have any type of weakness the protagonist does, like a horrible childhood or a special weapon that could kill them (if your writing science fiction). But I believe that their hate, anger, need for revenge, etc. is their true weakness.

It’s ultimately up to you and your character.

But whatever you do, don’t let the antagonist win! I am a strong believer that the protagonist should win if you want to keep writing about that protagonist and don't want to anger your readers. You can let the antagonist come close to winning and make it seem as though they may win, but in the end the antagonist should lose and the protagonist should triumph!


#1. Who is your favorite protagonist from a novel/series?
#2. Who is your favorite antagonist from a novel/series?


Friday, August 10, 2012

Chapter Ten: Halfway To The End

Halleluiah! Halleluiah! You’ve reached CHAPTER TEN! This is a big, important part of your book. First, it signifies that you are halfway to THE END. So let me congratulate you on this major writing achievement. You’re almost there!
Second, this means that a big event can happen now; bigger than whatever happened in chapter six. Evaluate your detailed plan, look over what you have been writing, and consider what could happen next. Remember: The event that happens in Chapter Ten will make all the difference to the rest of your novel.

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For a murder mystery, perhaps the investigator is getting too close for comfort and the killer has to take action. Maybe he attacks your investigator or another important character in your novel. For a suspense novel, literally anything can happen. For a romance novel, perhaps this is the first time your characters make love. Or maybe something traumatic happens to your main characters like a car accident.
Whatever genre your novel is, take your writing spark, light the fuse, and let the fireworks begin!

When you’re writing your own book, you can do whatever you want. You have the say over what happens to your characters because you’re the creator. Now go and show your novel who's boss and shake things up!

QUESTION: What book have you read with an event that shocked you to the core?

FYI: All books are different and all writers work differently. Your novel may have shorter chapters, which will mean your chapter number may be higher. If you created a detailed plot, then you should be able to see where your half-way point is in your novel. Whenever I mention a chapter, just change it for what implies to you. The chapter numbers are just to help you complete your novel, not a standard rule.

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Friday, August 3, 2012

The World Is Your Writing Tool

Painters search for beautiful landscapes that they can recreate on a canvas with brushstrokes. Poets always draw inspiration from the world they see to pen wonderful lines of poetry. Writers can do the same thing by morphing what they see with their eyes into words and sentences in their novel.

Look at a landscape as an artist would. See how it flows and rolls, how the grass sways and dances with the wind, how the sun comes down in beams through puffs of clouds. Instead of panting it, you’re writing it. The effect can be one in the same because you are literally painting the image in a readers mind.

Study the world as a poet would. Find different ways to describe what you see. Once, when I was taking a walk and admiring the sky, I noticed how the setting sun was transforming the fluffy clouds and giving them pretty pink and purple hues like cotton candy.  My brain light up with that thought and I immediately used it in my book: A cotton candy sky.

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The news is a great substitute if you do not have experience with something you need to write about. When I was re-writing my first book, I had collected articles from newspapers and jotted down specific notes that I found interesting. It’s a crazy world out there. Use it! Watch your local news and read articles; you never know what may inspire you.

Once you open your eyes to the world you will find writing possibilities everywhere. That is why one of my writing rules is to always have a notebook and pen because you never know when you may see something that you just need to put in your book, or hear a snippet of a passing conversation that sounds exactly like something one of your characters would say.
After all, the world is a great writing tool!

SHARE: What is your favorite writing tool for inspiration?

Mine has to be my past. There’s a lot of juicy stuff in my history that I tweak for my characters.

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