A protagonist is the main character in a novel or story
that all the action revolves around. He/she us the hero of the story, the one
we are rooting for from beginning to end. We follow his/her life, learn about his/her
problems, and know his/her feelings and thoughts.
A protagonist needs a weakness. This weakness can be
anything, from something that physically makes the protagonist weak to an event
from his/her past that frightens him/her. It can even be a bad quality.
In my series, the protagonist has supernatural powers and a
form of Kryptonite that hurts her. She also has many scars from her past that
resurface during the course of the series and a slight anger problem that
always gets the better of her.
A protagonist also loves. In every book, from every genre,
the protagonist loves. If they don’t actually fall in love then they should
show love. Another emotion a protagonist must reveal, at least once throughout
the whole story, is fear. Fear is the most common emotion; it makes us human, and
as I’ve mentioned before, you need to make your characters as real as possible.
Even my main character, who is known to be fearless, experiences fear in each
novel.
Most of all, a protagonist must struggle. Life is all about
struggle. There needs to be conflict that the protagonist has to overcome
whether it is beating cancer, putting a crumbling marriage back together,
finding true love, or saving the world.
Every story has a protagonist but not every story has an
antagonist.
An antagonist is a person who opposes, competes with, and
fights against the main character in a novel. He/she is the villain of the
story, the one we are hoping will fall to his/her demise. He/she causes
problems for the protagonist, does everything in his/her power to ruin the
protagonist’s life, and sometimes even tries to kill the protagonist.
An antagonist is driven to cause conflict on
the main character out of pure spite or for a deeper, darker reason, and he/she
won’t stop until the protagonist falls!
If you are writing the type of story that requires an
antagonist, like a mystery, horror or thriller, here are six tips to help you
create a powerful antagonist:
1. Surprise
your readers by putting an air of mystery around the antagonist. Keep their
identity and motive a secret.
2. Describe them in a
darker light than you would the protagonist. Make them look evil!
3. Create dialogue that is
sinister.
4. Make
them cold-hearted. Other than hate and anger, don’t let him or her show any
feelings, because an antagonist doesn’t have sympathy, compassion, mercy, and he/she
certainly don’t regret his/her actions.
5. Have them do horrific
things throughout the course of the novel, such as threaten, kidnap, torture,
and even kill.
UPDATE: Thanks to a comment I
received, I want to clarify what I said about the antagonist, especially #4.
There are really two types of antagonists; the kind that is extremely dark and
cold-hearted toward their victims and the kind that while they are portrayed as
"evil" they still possess at least one good quality. Above, I was
describing the first kind. It is always up to the writer on which version of
the antagonist they want to use.
In my series, there are multiple bad guys and a few of them
do show good qualities and even become good. But the main antagonists in my
stories are too evil to show an ounce of goodness, because not all antagonists
are meant to. But they definitely do have a weakness, which is
#6.
6. Give your antagonist a
weakness. This weakness doesn't have to be a quality opposite from their
demeanor, like one that is classified as good. The antagonist can have any type
of weakness the protagonist can have, like a horrible childhood or a special
weapon that could kill him/her (if you’re writing science fiction). But I
believe that an antagonist’s hate, anger, need for revenge, etc. is the true
weakness.
It’s ultimately up to you and your character.
P.S. I am a strong believer that the protagonist should win
if you want to keep writing about that protagonist and don't want to anger your
readers. You can let the antagonist come close to winning and make it seem as
though he/she will win, but in the end the antagonist loses and the protagonist
triumphs! But if you want to end the series, then by all means, let the antagonist
prove victories.
QUESTIONS:
#1. Who is your
favorite protagonist from a novel/series?
#2. Who is your
favorite antagonist from a novel/series?